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oof, this is giving rather amateurish writer vibes. Like it's fine, but there's some eyerolly stuff very early on. Gonna lower expectations waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay down.
— Jan 20, 2023 08:30AM
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Melani
is 13% done
You can't say something portentous like "and the dead always kill" to close out a chapter and then two paragraphs into the next chapter talk about harmless ghosts. That's just bad writing. Which is it, do the dead always kill, or are there some ghosts that are harmless?
— Jan 25, 2023 02:15PM
