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By Uda Kiyoko:
a scrap of iron—
without fail, menfolk
stop to look
beautifully
the cremation ends
before noon
dangling wisteria—
how could aging be this
beautiful?
mountain leeches too
have something to say—
let’s listen
— Jan 21, 2023 07:26PM
a scrap of iron—
without fail, menfolk
stop to look
beautifully
the cremation ends
before noon
dangling wisteria—
how could aging be this
beautiful?
mountain leeches too
have something to say—
let’s listen
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Haiku by Mayuzumi Madoka:
Mother’s Day—
I end up making
my mother cry
impelled to dream
Of soaring in the sky—
goldfish at night
pretending
not to have heard, I sip
a soda drink
watermelon is served,
ending the quarrel
between brothers
choosing a swimsuit—
when did his eyes
replace mine?
— Feb 13, 2023 07:25PM
Mother’s Day—
I end up making
my mother cry
impelled to dream
Of soaring in the sky—
goldfish at night
pretending
not to have heard, I sip
a soda drink
watermelon is served,
ending the quarrel
between brothers
choosing a swimsuit—
when did his eyes
replace mine?
Ben Rasmussen
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By Tsuji Momoko:
about you
it knows nothing—
a spring crab
with a man
at Kentucky Fried Chicken
I grieve spring’s departure
the butterfly—
its face is the same
as a caterpillar’s
— Jan 25, 2023 08:04PM
about you
it knows nothing—
a spring crab
with a man
at Kentucky Fried Chicken
I grieve spring’s departure
the butterfly—
its face is the same
as a caterpillar’s
Ben Rasmussen
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Read thee selection of haiku by Kuroda Momoko tonight. More traditional style haiku. My two favorites:
while the one
peels a white peach
the other weeps
whispering
something to the rose
she cuts the rose
— Jan 24, 2023 06:55PM
while the one
peels a white peach
the other weeps
whispering
something to the rose
she cuts the rose
Ben Rasmussen
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By Uda Kiyoko:
a scrap of iron—
without fail,
menfolk stop to look
beautifully
the cremation ends
before noon
dangling wisteria—
how could aging be this
beautiful?
mountain leeches too
have something to say—
let’s listen
— Jan 21, 2023 07:24PM
a scrap of iron—
without fail,
menfolk stop to look
beautifully
the cremation ends
before noon
dangling wisteria—
how could aging be this
beautiful?
mountain leeches too
have something to say—
let’s listen
Ben Rasmussen
is 72% done
By Inahata Teiko:
as if happiness
were waiting, the New
Year’s calendar
icefish—
their lives transparent
in the rippling water
— Jan 19, 2023 08:32PM
as if happiness
were waiting, the New
Year’s calendar
icefish—
their lives transparent
in the rippling water
Ben Rasmussen
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By Tsuda Kiyoko:
not knowing
the height of the mountain
an ant crawls on my knee
flying across the dunes
a butterfly and a crow
each without company
by the moonlit ocean
bereft of song
a bird and I
— Jan 15, 2023 08:21PM
not knowing
the height of the mountain
an ant crawls on my knee
flying across the dunes
a butterfly and a crow
each without company
by the moonlit ocean
bereft of song
a bird and I

