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I would like to see how this book plays out, but so far I am disappointed in the writing. The dialogue is robotic, and the protagonist over explains everything. I also feel like the situation doesn't make any sense (for example, in the same paragraph the protagonist talks about seeing her neice multiple nights a week yet she barely speaks to her sister, her niece's mom. This doesn't add up for me.)
— Jan 28, 2023 09:53PM
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Makayla
is on page 108 of 352
So she almost drowns due to natural undertow, she gets taken to the hospital, and then they diagnose her with some rare heart condition? That then her mom blames herself for?? I'm confused at how this adds up...and I'm tired of the broken heart thing so I hope something incredible gets woven into this by the end of the book.
— Feb 03, 2023 09:00PM
