Elithanathile’s Reviews > Not For Sale > Status Update

// So the phones of both men died?!? In this day and age when you can charge your phone in your car, that hardly seems like an excuse!!

// Who the hell is this author and does she even know English?!? She writes like those idiots on TikTok who can’t properly put two words together without it being grammatically incorrect!!

// I probably won’t read any other books by this author! Actually, let me rephrase that, I most definitely won’t be reading any more books by this author!! Ever!! This author is just weird, and has super sloppy and lazy and amateur and childish and juvenile writing!!

// This author gets in her own way, because there are some parts that are quite hot, but then there are other parts that sounds so incredibly amateur and juvenile and childish!! It’s really fucking weird and it just makes this author come across as incredibly obnoxious and the main problem in this book, no pun intended!! She just sabotages her own book and it makes me angry!!

// Make you up your fucking mind, author, Asian glow is very specifically something in particular, and then you refer to mere blushing as Asian glow as well!! You contradict and then you confuse what you’re actually talking about, which makes me think you have absolutely no fucking idea what you’re talking about, except for making specific points in the stupidest ways possible! This author is fucking obnoxious!!!

// This author clearly wants you to know that one of the MCs is Asian, but I think it’s really fucking weird that she keeps mentioning the phrase “Asian glow” as a way to do that!!

// We are already off to a very bad start!! Why the fuck is there a comma after the word “and”?!? There’s already an Oxford comma before it!!