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This is generally well written from a plot, characters, and development standpoint, but the incomplete sentences really started to gnaw at my grammar correction tendency. Commas and semicolons would have been more effective than periods and incomplete sentences. The art of developing compound sentences and complete paragraphs is sometimes ignored by some authors.
— Jan 30, 2023 08:44AM
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is on page 172 of 318
I am reading this for the second time. I appreciate the lack of foul language in the book. Incomplete sentences could be edited to make smoother reading.
— Jan 29, 2023 04:40AM
