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Celya
is 80% done
其實很簡單。范閑曾經看過賀宗緯對若若流露出那種熾烈貪婪的目光，就為了這種目光，他記他一輩子，要壓他一輩子，要讓他永世不得翻身。 FX hates He Zhongwei bec he could tell that the young man covets his sister.
— Feb 12, 2023 12:41PM
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Celya
is 92% done
– there is a lot of exposition, a lot of explaining, and repeating and explaining, and repeating
- the dialogue is written in modern language
- Loses the formal classical atmosphere
— Jul 29, 2023 02:33PM
- the dialogue is written in modern language
- Loses the formal classical atmosphere
Celya
is 78% done
紙上的內容，也並不出乎范閑的預料，上面記錄著某人對某人的某些建議，比如監察院，比如商賈事，還有幾張便條，是說今天想吃什麼，明天大家打算到哪裡去玩……
6.60
– What a moving scene
– FX finds letters, written by his mother.
— Jan 19, 2023 12:49PM
6.60
– What a moving scene
– FX finds letters, written by his mother.
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Feb 12, 2023 01:27PM
不得不說，李弘成與范閑在對待賀大人的態度上出奇的一致。顯然，這是因為他們都非常記仇，記得當年賀宗緯想吃范若若這個雪天鵝的仇。Both FX and Li Hongcheng hate He for the same reason.
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