XX’s Reviews > The Librarian and the Orc > Status Update

i might be demanding too much from pulp KU smut, but the author went to the full trouble of making an orc language that contains several swear words, only to have one of the orc characters drop about 12 "fucks" (and i don't mean the dirty-talk kind of "fuck", which could be excused because context) and at least one "hell" (which is a word that pokes holes in things too) in the last 2 pages. immersion-breaking. bleh.