kimberly_rose’s Reviews > Thick Omega > Status Update
kimberly_rose
is 99% done
Absolutely felt stomach flutters from the emotions at the beginning (four stars! even with the typos and awkward language), but the romance component of the story quickly felt over, with the conflict between the two MCs feeling forced, manufactured, not a real crisis. The conflict shifted to political shenanigans for one MC (which bore me) and business/career aspirations for the other (which also bore me).
— Feb 18, 2023 12:35PM
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