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Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey
Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey is 16% done
Not liking the writing style so far. It was fine in the 0.5 book Fight; mainly because it was from a childs point of view. Now that Autumn is in college it's not working all that well. It still feels like she has a childs point of view.
Feb 27, 2015 12:50AM
Fierce (Fierce, #1)

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Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey
Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey is 86% done
WTF....this is a situation where you call the cops...plus Evie screamed in a coed dorm so where is everyone? Was this book even edited? So far, the only good thing about it is the cover. This is just bad writing with no thought, stupid plot, ignorant characters. I'm going to finish reading this one and not even open the others. The crap writing is making me seriously rethink whether to read her other books now too.
Feb 27, 2015 03:14PM
Fierce (Fierce, #1)


Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey
Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey is 37% done
"He's like a motorcycle rider, only he isn't. He just looks like one." Why not just say he looks like a biker? Why she put it the way she did I will never understand. All it did for me was make Autumn sound more naive and young, like middle school young.
Feb 27, 2015 12:06PM
Fierce (Fierce, #1)


Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey
Felecia **Victorious Rebel** Mulkey is 26% done
Autumn is so naive...I feel like slapping my forehead against a desktop or wall; it's that bad.
Feb 27, 2015 10:53AM
Fierce (Fierce, #1)


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