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is 30% done
Okay!
The dialogue between the two protagonists so far makes almost no sense to me, the dynamics feel rushed as to create some sort of an emotional link between both Derek and Crystal felt like an urgent mission to accomplish by the author!
Also am sensing forced drama insert into the plot! It's not helping keeping me interested as all!
I SHALL CONTINUE TO SEE.....
— Feb 28, 2023 03:14AM
The dialogue between the two protagonists so far makes almost no sense to me, the dynamics feel rushed as to create some sort of an emotional link between both Derek and Crystal felt like an urgent mission to accomplish by the author!
Also am sensing forced drama insert into the plot! It's not helping keeping me interested as all!
I SHALL CONTINUE TO SEE.....
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