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Shannon
is 59% done
I can't pinpoint exactly why but I am having such a hard time with this book. I was super intrigued in the first part, but it seems to be really dragging in the middle here. It's starting to seem to me like this book could have really benefitted from some serious editing. It maybe even could have dropped 10-20% and lost nothing. There's just too much fluff, too many things happening unrelated to the main storyline.
— Mar 12, 2023 12:25PM
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