Bethany’s Reviews > Son of a Trickster > Status Update

Still same issues with the way the narrative is presented. And...still feels like there is not really any plot progression at ALL. Its kind of sad really when I had wanted to read this book for quite a while. I'm still trying to hang on though...

I'm finding the narrative style really hard to read. It gets confusing really quick with why certain information is presented they way it is and when within the story.

So far its really like the author is just putting down all of her plot points, but not actually weaving the story smoothly.

Its a lot of "oh here's a fact!" and "here's another fact". But its not feeling like storytelling at all.

Time sequences seem blotchy.

Very heavy on the foul language, especially for something that is written for a young adult teen to (13-15) read.