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Vespertine
is on page 126 of 487
So far, not too bad, despite all the vegetable. The writing makes it just hard for me to read it seamlessly - yes, I didn't know there was such thing as too much punctuation for my taste !
— Mar 13, 2015 03:00PM
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Vespertine
is on page 93 of 487
"His hair is orange-red, the color of an old carrot." I don't know why, but I'm sensing a pattern here...
— Mar 13, 2015 02:49PM
Vespertine
is on page 96 of 487
"I watch the light leave Will's eyes, which are pale green, like celery." Eye colour and vegetable, that's a first for me !
— Mar 13, 2015 02:46PM
