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“Everything was slightly angled, as if placed there by a drunk on his knees.”
“I followed..into a space that looked like it had been attacked by a cannon that shot out toys.”
“…a package of Fig Newton cookies that looked like it had been ripped open by a wolf.”
2 things I dislike: overuse of similes & forced pop culture references to “prove” the time period. This has both in the first 7 pages. DNF
— Mar 21, 2023 04:48AM
“I followed..into a space that looked like it had been attacked by a cannon that shot out toys.”
“…a package of Fig Newton cookies that looked like it had been ripped open by a wolf.”
2 things I dislike: overuse of similes & forced pop culture references to “prove” the time period. This has both in the first 7 pages. DNF
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