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Marissa
Marissa is on page 84 of 416
I realized what I initially didn't like about the author's prose. It relies so much on repetition, at least in the opening chapters. Many, many mentions of cooked cream, a "brutish age," and this guy's worm-like mouth. Just a weird opening. Now suddenly both prose and narrative are flowing quite well. Guess I needed to stick with it?
Mar 21, 2023 03:26PM
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Marissa is on page 50 of 416
First, the cover, yes. But the prose is...obscure? In a way that feels more clumsy than deliberate. A puzzling choice for juvenile fic. I think I just want to talk to someone about this book and why it is the way it is.
Mar 19, 2023 07:31PM
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