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Chris Dow
is 91% done
Finished the story. It wasn't terrible, as stories go. It was, however, very clunky and clumsy. Character dialog was obvious, without the nuance and such associated with human speech.
— Mar 16, 2015 07:08AM
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Chris Dow
is 29% done
Quick read, but lots of mistakes. Kind of clunky and awkwardly written. Interesting story so far.
— Mar 14, 2015 04:39PM
