Susan’s Reviews > Mr. Sandman > Status Update

Good plot so far, interesting and unusual. Too bad the flow of reading is broken up by misused words and very awkward grammar. For example: " The old woman raised her glasses to her face that had been dangling around her neck on a silver chain." How painful it must be to have your face dangling from a chain! Almost every page has at least one typo and/or misused word. Is proofreading a thing of the past?