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Skipping from 3rd person to 1st person then back again in one paragraph is extremely irritating.
— Mar 21, 2015 06:13AM
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Kellee
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This first meeting between Stacy and Tylon has me rolling my eyes. I'm sure they annoy me throughout the rest of the book.
— Mar 24, 2015 12:29PM
Kellee
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Since when do cell phones have dial tones? I hate when authors say a person heard a dial tone.
— Mar 23, 2015 02:32AM

