The Queen Katz’s Reviews > Soldier's Duty > Status Update

Really….that’s the story…
I can’t - I just can’t…

I think I’m done with reading fiction for a while -

More contradictions....I hate when a pages days one thing and a few pages/chapter later it contradicts what was already said!!!!

And downhill we are sliding - the conversation and storyline are choppy. The flow just isn’t working for me and it’s actually making me want to just find another book -I don’t think I want to bother with the last 100 pages.

Plus 2 major issues in one short book, there is not enough to flesh out each issue properly plus have a romance - something has to give

And now we move to unbelievable
So she runs away, doesn't have any contact with her mother, runs home when she is in hospital, old rancher takes her to task or her distance- yet why didn't mum contact/visit her

A good start, but now they are waiting for the rest of the family to arrive and Angus wants a full account - why not wait the hour (they are all due to arrive within the hour) so they can all hear it together and mum doesn’t have to repeat the same story again and again and again