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Whore and monk, we sleep
Under one roof together,
Moon in a field of clover
— Apr 06, 2023 08:59AM
Under one roof together,
Moon in a field of clover
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Flo
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When he writes
'how reluctantly
The bee emerges from deep
Within the peony'
Is he merely presenting a pathetic fallacy, attributing human emotion to a bee, or is he entering into the authentic experience of 'beeness' as deeply as possible? (...) His detailed observation calls for something other than metaphor; it demands literal accuracy. Is the bee inside his mind or outside?
— Apr 06, 2023 08:37AM
'how reluctantly
The bee emerges from deep
Within the peony'
Is he merely presenting a pathetic fallacy, attributing human emotion to a bee, or is he entering into the authentic experience of 'beeness' as deeply as possible? (...) His detailed observation calls for something other than metaphor; it demands literal accuracy. Is the bee inside his mind or outside?
Flo
is on page 10 of 117
When explaining haiku's and their aesthetic, this beautiful word came up:
"Sabishisa' = the sense of beautiful aloneness
— Apr 06, 2023 08:30AM
"Sabishisa' = the sense of beautiful aloneness
Flo
is starting
Bought this tiny book of joy in Edinburgh and just opening it on random pages has been giving me so much joy.
— Apr 06, 2023 08:28AM
