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Nicole
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"Unslithered" is not a word. Tarantulas do not hang from aerial webs. Lots of omitted words and spelling/grammatical errors. It would be great if we could stick with a verb tense and not have 4 different characters giving 1st person POV.
— Mar 29, 2015 10:09PM
Nicole
is on page 37 of 394
"Seizuring" is not a word, and cutesy spellings of words aren't really all that cute.
— Mar 29, 2015 02:04PM
