Matt’s Reviews > Ciel In All Directions > Status Update

Wtf why would you set up an interesting conflict and then instantly defuse it? Oh gee I hope we don't have to go back to that cafe where the employee embarrassed us... Oh ok good we don't
Weak

Canadian buses don't have a stop cord? You actually have to get the driver's attention? How quaint

This scene in the country is nice, I can hear birds and smell the sun on the grass- oh, that's in reality

"I read online that it was a good idea to interact with people on my channel."
So it's not because you actually like your fans, ok 🤣

"my friend immediately starts to recite poetry in a very expressive way. Yeah, I know! I can’t get over that she’s able to do that!"
...and that's it, that's the end of the chapter. This is what I mean when I say you're describing the scene instead of describing the action

"She looks very knowledgeable, so I imitate her."
Same

You'd have to look exceedingly masculine to actually be denied access to the womens restroom. There are some pretty masculine women out there

"The proportion of kids with natural colored hair is very low" 🤣 ok well you heard it here first

Okay put your nine year old in drag, but talking about his cleavage is a little much

I can believe this narrator is 14 years old. I know YA tends to have zero subtlety but the torrents of information in every character introduction are a little excessive