♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣’s Reviews > The Opera House > Status Update
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I'm either gonna have to dnf or leave this for later because... I just can't. Sucks. Looked so promising. Ya gotta show me, not tell me!
— Apr 01, 2015 02:49PM
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♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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Then, suddenly, Micky bucked and yelled “I’ m cumming, oh my god, I’m cumming,” and emptied himself into the reservoir of the condom inside Raphael ’s ass.
O_o I mean... O_o
— Mar 31, 2015 07:26PM
O_o I mean... O_o
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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Holy statement of the obvious, batman. Granted, this is my first time reading this author but, wow, repetitive and nothing is left unsaid.
— Mar 31, 2015 06:18PM
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If you're going to use strong words like "stunned", it helps to have something by which to compare. I got nuttin', cuz ya idn't give it to me.
— Mar 30, 2015 09:08PM
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Warren was amazed to hear this level of honesty from Raphael and was encouraged.
I would be, too, except... I've really only been told about Raphael's tendencies, not shown them. No show, no know.
— Mar 30, 2015 08:42PM
I would be, too, except... I've really only been told about Raphael's tendencies, not shown them. No show, no know.
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Such promise, and the grief... I understand. But wow, lots of telling, not much showing.
— Mar 30, 2015 08:27PM
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Apr 01, 2015 03:51PM
Jettison that puppy then. Life's too short.
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Exactly. Sooooooo many others to enjoy.
Toss it into the reservoir of the condom inside Raphael ’s ass... maybe? Too harsh? I just read that update and made a very unattractive face at it. Eww and no.
Yeah, up until that point, i thought maybe i could make it but.... this pretty much demonstrates the incredibly straightforward, nothing left unsaid writing style, with clinical tones and very basic overall storytelling.Back onto the pile it goes.
