Gwen’s Reviews > The Beast's Bet > Status Update
Gwen
is 13% done
"Her breasts rose and fell, pressing against the line of her bodice as she took in his words."
This reminds me of badly written heaving breasts books hahaha.
— Apr 22, 2023 08:31AM
This reminds me of badly written heaving breasts books hahaha.
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Gwen
is 25% done
Gave up. Writing just isn't clicking. Seems awkward. Neither characters seem to have any personality. Almost seems like boring narrative of the events taking place. DNF and not reading another in the series.
— Apr 22, 2023 08:50AM
Gwen
is 11% done
Struggling to connect to either character. Paragraph structure seems disjointed...maybe that's why?
— Apr 22, 2023 08:22AM
