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Kristine W
is 86% done
Too many characters and too many events, not to mention, fast forwarding in time and glossing over occurrences without much backing. Character development is sloppy and inconsistent. The dialogue sounds artificial and behaviors seem odd at times. I will finish the book for no reason other than I've already gotten this far.
— Jul 01, 2015 03:45PM
Kristine W
is 50% done
This is an interesting premise, but the dialogue and editing could use an adept eye. It is not captivating me the way I had anticipated.
— Jun 08, 2015 07:09AM

