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Desiree
is 3% done
I was so looking forward to this book but am having a hard time. Not sure if it's a editor issue or what but it doesn't flow right. Some sentences keep repeating and other bits are cut off. Like you read one sentence, it ends in a period then go on to read the next only to see it start with no capitalization and s broken sentence. Very frustrating.
— Apr 04, 2015 06:54PM
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Desiree
is 67% done
A great story but the book is still plagued with editing issues. Ugh
— Apr 04, 2015 10:25PM

