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The word servant is jarring and distracting every time it comes up. It's dishonest. Say slave.
— Apr 27, 2023 10:54AM
Kaitlin
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Are we going backwards in time? The first entry was December 26th, this one is December 18th, and starts with "I awoke the next morning"
Also that isn't what you would write in a diary. You would say today.
— Apr 27, 2023 10:36AM
Also that isn't what you would write in a diary. You would say today.
