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Jules
is 48% done
M/m romance, 176 pages, Kindle unlimited
The beginning was great, the writing feels fluid, one of the MCs has servere OCD that sounded interesting. Now I' m at 48% and it feels like one sex scene after the next. I' m missing the OCD storyline. It is there somewhere but it doesn't feel right. Just after one night they are dropping their clothing everywhere, eat in bed, sleeping without changing the sheets -
— Apr 07, 2015 07:32AM
The beginning was great, the writing feels fluid, one of the MCs has servere OCD that sounded interesting. Now I' m at 48% and it feels like one sex scene after the next. I' m missing the OCD storyline. It is there somewhere but it doesn't feel right. Just after one night they are dropping their clothing everywhere, eat in bed, sleeping without changing the sheets -
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Jules
is 99% done
M/m romance, Kindle unlimited, 176 pages. I was a little disappointed in the middle but I' m going to rate this with 4 stars because the story gained on substance. Nice read.
— Apr 07, 2015 11:12AM
