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Less thinking, more doing/talking/action please!!!
— Apr 15, 2015 04:24PM
Less thinking, more doing/talking/action please!!!
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Apr 07, 2015 05:28PM
How are you liking it so far FL?
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Erin wrote: "How are you liking it so far FL?"The plot I enjoy, the narrative structure, not so much. Needs major editing....
FantasyLiving wrote: "Erin wrote: "How are you liking it so far FL?"The plot I enjoy, the narrative structure, not so much. Needs major editing...."
Yea, feel the same way,but I also feel it's a little slow.
Erin wrote: "FantasyLiving wrote: "Erin wrote: "How are you liking it so far FL?"The plot I enjoy, the narrative structure, not so much. Needs major editing...."
Yea, feel the same way,but I also feel it's ..."
Because it's bogged down with too many unnecessary (and frankly, incorrectly placed) words.
I'm putting it aside for today. I'll pick it back up later.
FantasyLiving wrote: "Erin wrote: "FantasyLiving wrote: "Erin wrote: "How are you liking it so far FL?"The plot I enjoy, the narrative structure, not so much. Needs major editing...."
Yea, feel the same way,but I al..."
True, I can see your what your saying.
I've moved on to Solitude of Stars. Androgynous men are a turn on for me 
FantasyLiving wrote: "I've moved on to Solitude of Stars. Androgynous men are a turn on for me "
I really enjoyed that book. I couldn't put it down. I think, you'll like it too!
FantasyLiving wrote: "I've moved on to Solitude of Stars. Androgynous men are a turn on for me "
He reminds me of Aoi. =D
=D I fixed the other pic link so it should be there now.
I'm up to the part where they're heading to the car after meeting Aoi.
FantasyLiving wrote: "=D I fixed the other pic link so it should be there now.
I'm up to the part where they're heading to the car after meeting Aoi."
Ok, I can see now. =D
I know where you're at, still in the beginning.
