Eileen’s Reviews > Skin Deep > Status Update
Eileen
is 35% done
I’m having a hard time with the writing style. It seems every look, thought, feeling or piece of dialogue has a detailed explanation. It messes with the flow and makes the dialogue feel choppy. Then I skip around and miss the ‘good’ explanations that should be there…it’s a struggle.
— May 04, 2023 07:58AM
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