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[Ah, it’s still just a computer, Wyn.” Tyson said. “It’s only as smart as the people giving it orders.]

Oh good lord no

Is division 1812 a farce? Why were there ONLY the five stolen kids and Dyanna?? You’re telling me that no one worked the Apple orchards before these kids and dyanna?

Lmao, Dyanna’s reasons for lying are not only stupid but also dangerous to the kids. Ugh. This book. ಠ_ಠ

Definite typo - submit to publisher
[And for the first time since Wynter had seen Estrella, fear laced al of her features.]

Typo?
[They have breaching our security!]

[Wynter’s heart pounded and she quietly prayed that no one would need paper from this closet.]

Ah, yes. A society with the technology of sentient AI, but a meeting would still rely on paper? Anachronisms on anachronisms in this book.

[Next to the fake-Wynter in the box, a screen displayed a subway wreck. Chrys’s heart clenched at the destruction. The date was seventeen years ago.]

This further supports my timeline; that twice it was said “16 years ago” when it was actually 13.

[Chrys furrowed his brow. “The Coterie is the government here, right?” He asked Tyson in a hushed voice.]

Oh good gravy. 🤦‍♀️ there is no way he didn’t know that. There’s no genuine way he would actually ask this question.

[“They’re proud of the name: MIRA. It’s somewhere in every room, and it’s on pretty much every label. Makes sense that it’d be the password too. Easy to remember for workers.”]

This is just like Estrella's password being 'Estrella.Black'. Like, come on. It really and truly wouldn't be that easy or straightforward. These are paranoid, secretive coders. This just isn't realistic.

[”So to remove Estrella is to also lose Sorren, a move that The Cotrie, nor the people of Dyvercity, are willing to make at this time—“
Aidric lost interest and moved on. He didn’t care about Dyvercity gossip. Everyone here left the poor divisions alone unless they needed something, so half of this gossip didn’t pertain to them anyways.]
Um, except it directly does. So much for that intelligence (yet again)