Paul Bradley’s Reviews > Mastodon > Status Update

First alarm bell is the reading of the 'advance praise', I already bought it, please lay off the adverts.
Second is the terrible audio with empty channel feedback and sounds of fidgeting left in.
Third is the clichéd 'man writing woman' flaws.
Next, clumsy narration, run-on.
Then we have clumsy writing in general.

Shame, I fancied something contemporary and different, pity that it wasn't executed well enough.