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This has such a cool premise, but so far it's a let-down. No reasonable suspension of disbelief could prepare me for a fight scene where two recent college graduates (one with an injured arm) fought off multiple trained and armed military agents in a fight that emphasized hand-to-hand combat.
— May 17, 2023 01:16PM
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Niko
is on page 169 of 376
I know this book got an edit between its Amazon publication and its trade publication, but it needed at least one more pair of eyes on it. I just read an entire chapter where a POV character was standing behind another character but somehow managed to see and describe every expression and movement on her face.
— May 19, 2023 04:01PM
Niko
is on page 115 of 376
You're given the chance to describe a modern-day Library of Alexandria, and the best you can do is a vague paragraph about a room with a high ceiling and some pneumatic tubes?
— May 18, 2023 06:39PM
