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Paused right before ch5 for the night. 4/5 read so far
The beginning felt extremely rushed, but I can tell the author wanted to push the focus to the gamelit/fantasy world side.
So far it's been pretty well written with my only irk that it's crunchier than I usually prefer. Every attack and kill having a new separate notification gets a bit tedious. It's a offset by the pretty gripping action though.
— May 24, 2023 01:35AM
The beginning felt extremely rushed, but I can tell the author wanted to push the focus to the gamelit/fantasy world side.
So far it's been pretty well written with my only irk that it's crunchier than I usually prefer. Every attack and kill having a new separate notification gets a bit tedious. It's a offset by the pretty gripping action though.
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