Kellee’s Reviews > Torn: I Dont Need You, But I Want You > Status Update
Kellee
is 13% done
The errors are irritating. The author can't keep up with the characters correct first/last names, ages or timeline. The storyline is decent but it's hard to enjoy when something is said to have happened to a character while they were in their mid teens, that character is now 29yo but knew someone 23 yrs ago...while they both were in their mid teens! WTF! Super irritated.
— Apr 23, 2015 08:00PM
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Kellee
is 13% done
In the beginning it's Latavia Wakefield. Now it's Watkins!
— Apr 23, 2015 04:12AM
Kellee
is 13% done
Super irritated. The author doesn't remember the main character's correct name
— Apr 23, 2015 04:11AM
Kellee
is 11% done
Corny jokes and a lot of errors. I've already skipped pages due to characters repeating what another character has already described in detail.
— Apr 22, 2015 07:24PM
