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I hate to give a 2 but I am. H and h meet late so and she basically is cruel to him and his feelings. Only wants her ex way until like 82% of the book. Gives almost a pity F , sort of betrays the H by lying about her quest. And all of a sudden the end is so random and yeah. Poor hero.

Read book 1 and 2 and then stop.

I can’t even with this h. It’s 88%. Her plot twist spell is the most stupid and horrible decision and it’s very horrible to the H and it’s 88%. h is now at a 1 star and H is at a 5 and he should leave. I don’t get how this is a romance? A few pages for her to not do the thing she is trying to do the whole book & she needs a big grovel and a big grow the f up time? Why are h’s sometimes written so badly?

This heroine is a 2 star, the hero is 4.5.

She is quite TSTL and beyond horrible to the H

Ok so… at this point of the book you leave the H and run excitedly across the room to hang out with a satyr then ignore H and talk in front of him all about the ex STILL and about your love for him? Not past tense. She’s friend zoning H and yet reading the she really don’t want her to have a hea. The writing flows well but I can’t rate this high for plot. And such a shame because book 1 and 2 are awesome.

Walking through a dangerous wooded place, not seeing monsters before… you run into a goblin. What’s your move?

It should not be to ask where to procure a haircut.

I don’t like this heroine. At. All.

Whole better than book 3, this one also has the H and h meet soooo late in the book. I wish it was more like book 1 and 2 which were excellent! Meeting so late and at 65% only having one day, no sparks, her still thinking of her ex over and over… it’s better than 3 but I want more at this point. And the H is great. The h is such a doormat for her ex who is all she thinks about.