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I notice an abundance of minor plot errors. Bingley references elements of the proposal before he is told of its occurrence. Later, Elizabeth asks him if Darcy still loves her, but she is supposed to think Bingley still doesn't know their history so why would she ask? It was stressed that Darcy and Elizabeth are private people and then suddenly they're telling the whole world their secrets.
Apr 28, 2015 01:54AM
The Red Chrysanthemum

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