Crazypetlady’s Reviews > Ava and the Bear > Status Update
Crazypetlady
is on page 193 of 326
There's a lot of repeating. They want each other, he doesn't have relationships or date humans, she's scared...we don't need that repeated for 5 chapters. And yet, here we are.
— Jun 02, 2023 08:17PM
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Crazypetlady
is on page 259 of 326
Ok, this series drags and repeats the same thing over and over and then it finally starts moving the story forward. It also includes multiple other couples stories in the book and starts the next book in the series in the current book. Needs to focus on one story at a time and pare down the repeating "we can never be together".
— Jun 06, 2023 06:05AM
