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Jun 02, 2023 08:26PM
All We Could Have Been

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Phases
Phases is on page 185 of 291
good. lots of character development which I like to see. kind of jumpy, sometimes ideas that don’t connect are merged together, doesn’t affect my reading though.
Jun 02, 2023 08:25PM
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Ok so far. Sometimes it seems like you could just fill in all the spots. Kind of a slow burn. Pick up the pace?
May 08, 2023 03:08PM
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