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Charity
is 15% done
Ugh. These books STILL need an edit. There’s no break between scene scenes. Nothing. It looks like part of the same scene/paragraph. It’s annoying to have to keep rereading parts to figure out what’s going on. EDIT
— Jun 03, 2023 06:41AM
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Charity
is 58% done
A reread of this series has been eye opening. I loved this the first time. This time? Still good, but lord, the female characters need slapped, and the men sometimes too.
— Jun 05, 2023 08:17AM
