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Carmen
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"You can't tell me what to do!" I'm standing now, fully indignant.
"Oh, yes, I can. I'm still your father."
Oh, don't start with this shit!
— Apr 28, 2015 09:45PM
"Oh, yes, I can. I'm still your father."
Oh, don't start with this shit!
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Carmen
is 97% done
"Don't be coy."
I fucking hate when people say this to me. 1.) I'll be coy if I want to, damn it. 2.) Maybe I just don't want to tell you shit. It's not being coy, I just don't trust you, jackass.
— Apr 29, 2015 06:27AM
I fucking hate when people say this to me. 1.) I'll be coy if I want to, damn it. 2.) Maybe I just don't want to tell you shit. It's not being coy, I just don't trust you, jackass.
Carmen
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"Sit down," he says, not so gently now. "Sometimes your stubbornness is cute, but not right now."
o.O Wow. Fuck you, Bentley.
— Apr 29, 2015 06:04AM
o.O Wow. Fuck you, Bentley.
Carmen
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"You'll let him go?" she asks with a small, hopeful smile.
"Yeah," I say, but I'm not sure what I've done.
Oh-kay. Listen... a man is not an object. Dani can't just say, "Okay, I've decided I don't love you, Bentley. You are free to go." And then think Bentley is going to run into Callie's arms. If he loves Dani, he can't just switch off his love. Men aren't possessions you can pass off to other women
— Apr 29, 2015 04:10AM
"Yeah," I say, but I'm not sure what I've done.
Oh-kay. Listen... a man is not an object. Dani can't just say, "Okay, I've decided I don't love you, Bentley. You are free to go." And then think Bentley is going to run into Callie's arms. If he loves Dani, he can't just switch off his love. Men aren't possessions you can pass off to other women
Carmen
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My heartbeat picks up when I just realize what I've done. I can't deny him now. I'm the one who came on to him. What kind of hypocrite or tease would that make me?
You're not a hypocrite or tease. Just tell him you don't want to have sex. You have the right to say 'no.'
— Apr 29, 2015 03:26AM
You're not a hypocrite or tease. Just tell him you don't want to have sex. You have the right to say 'no.'
Carmen
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"So you don't like the beard huh?" he asks, distracted as he looks into a handheld mirror and rubs at his beard.
"Well, it is different. I kinda miss your face."
Ugh, no! Don't make him shave! You haven't even given him a chance to show you all the fun things a man with a beard can do! You're missing a golden opportunity here! I'd advise extensive exploration and testing before making a decision.
— Apr 29, 2015 03:23AM
"Well, it is different. I kinda miss your face."
Ugh, no! Don't make him shave! You haven't even given him a chance to show you all the fun things a man with a beard can do! You're missing a golden opportunity here! I'd advise extensive exploration and testing before making a decision.
Carmen
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"Yeah, but it's gotten worse. All God wants us to do is be kind to one another, love Him, and follow His rules. But us humans? We think we are bigger than Him. We don't want a baby? We have a solution for that, a legal one even."
If this book turns into some kind of Christian preachy anti-abortion bullshit I am going to be VERY UPSET.
— Apr 29, 2015 02:53AM
If this book turns into some kind of Christian preachy anti-abortion bullshit I am going to be VERY UPSET.
Carmen
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"Have you given him anything? Medicine?" I ask as I look him over. His body is in a tight ball as he screams. This is truly a miserable child.
"No. I've been praying God will take care of him."
Sigh.
— Apr 28, 2015 10:00PM
"No. I've been praying God will take care of him."
Sigh.
Carmen
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"We're still her parents and we're in charge here."
"Since when?" Bentley challenges back.
Yes. Good point, Bentley. Remind me to talk about this in my review.
— Apr 28, 2015 09:48PM
"Since when?" Bentley challenges back.
Yes. Good point, Bentley. Remind me to talk about this in my review.
