Lydia’s Reviews > Fourth Wing > Status Update
Lydia
is 46% done
I love the dragons, so far they’re the coolest part and my reason to keep going. Everyone isn’t at each other’s throats QUITE as much as the beginning which is good too…
But I’m really struggling with the juvenile writing style. Usage of modern slang/language in a non-contemporary setting feels very lazy to me.
— Jun 18, 2023 12:14PM
But I’m really struggling with the juvenile writing style. Usage of modern slang/language in a non-contemporary setting feels very lazy to me.
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Lydia
is 19% done
Trying again.
I don’t think I love modern slang in a fantasy book. No one in a setting without the internet should say “for the win”.
— Jun 16, 2023 01:01PM
I don’t think I love modern slang in a fantasy book. No one in a setting without the internet should say “for the win”.
