Honest Mabel’s Reviews > Taken by the Alien Warrior > Status Update
Honest Mabel
is 27% done
Well, it is interesting they aren’t starting out with the leader unless the king dies and the MMC becomes king
— Jun 19, 2023 10:05AM
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Honest Mabel
is 35% done
The kiss is forced and awkward in the scene I am unimpressed
— Jun 19, 2023 10:13AM
Honest Mabel
is 32% done
How old is the FMC? Bc if you are holding on to high school bs like this maybe you shouldn’t be dating anyone
— Jun 19, 2023 10:11AM
Honest Mabel
is 9% done
Boy is this rushed. 9% in we have had switched POV’s, abduction, a crash, etc. That is a lot to pack into the first 9% of the book. Do you have beta readers? Does anyone actually solicit feedback about their books before publishing ???
— Jun 19, 2023 09:36AM
