Starlight’s Reviews > Sarazen's Claim > Status Update

This was a reread

So many annoying and irritating fucking grammatical errors.
The writing style is weird too. Lots of cringe moments in dialogue and just generally the way the story was progressing.

The idea of this story has so much potential though. And yet, lots of little things added up almost ruins it entirely. I vaguely recall some details not going to be resolved too. So ugh