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The density of the prose is intimidating. Finding I have to be really committed to the reading experience. The rule of three is a bit overdone in his descriptions. Do we really need three examples for everything? Structurally, I'm curious how this plays out after it begins with an opening section (prologue? though, not called that) titled "Happiness." Seriously, where could this go after a start like that? We'll see.
— Jun 21, 2023 09:27AM
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