Jon’s Reviews > A Fortress of Grey Ice > Status Update

Aspects of this are great, but there's a strange incoherence as well. What are these shadow things doing when not pursuing various individuals? How is it possible that basically no one is aware of all these horrors? Why has there never been any technological or sociological progress given the many thousands of years? All a bit more telling than showing than I'd prefer as well.

But still, mostly enjoying it.