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Ann Crystal
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Kiara and Carroway fearing that they will have to prove their loyalty is driving me crazy, because Tris seems to be jumping right into believing it a possibility.
If Tris's reaction to the allegations had been:
"I don't believe it for one moment. I will investigate, for my own peace of mind, for our unborn child, and for my people as their king. But until it is proven, I don't believe it true."
that'd make sense.
— Jun 24, 2023 01:53PM
If Tris's reaction to the allegations had been:
"I don't believe it for one moment. I will investigate, for my own peace of mind, for our unborn child, and for my people as their king. But until it is proven, I don't believe it true."
that'd make sense.
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Ann Crystal
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While I continue to wish there were more scenes with Jonmarc, Carina, and the characters at Dark Haven, the story really does need all the characters to tell the story. Chapter 22 was excellent! Like a magical duet between Tris and Carina. Very well done. I still could do with less war scenes...
— Jun 23, 2023 10:56AM
Ann Crystal
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Tris just managed to annoy me. How could he believe, even for a second, that Kiara would betray him? The only thing that letter should have told him was that Kiara and Carroway were in danger.
Wish for more time spent in and around Dark Haven.
It does a good job of jumping between characters to advance the storyline. While I do find this interesting, I find myself rushing through them to return to Dark Haven...
— Jun 22, 2023 02:26PM
Wish for more time spent in and around Dark Haven.
It does a good job of jumping between characters to advance the storyline. While I do find this interesting, I find myself rushing through them to return to Dark Haven...
