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Hmmm. I feel like I should be more excited at this point. There seems to be some pointless details that don't add to the story unless there will be a call back later. For example a mentioned visit that happens and has no explanation of what happened. Totally unnecessary. A grown man being really embarrassed about adult magazines from his childhood to the point where he asks AI to erase their memory. Seriously?
Jun 26, 2023 01:27PM
Backyard Starship (Backyard Starship, #1)

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