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...closer, and when they were almost at the gate, he tightly gripped the rains.

Rains?

Velvet? In the 1200s? Oh well, the great Sharon Penman made the same error back in the days :p

But your annulment could take weeks to be approved by the Church, maybe longer.

Who knew annulments were so easy in the 13C. Why did Henry VIII have so much trouble?

She's never been outside of the castle on the Welsh border outside of the trip from London to get there. How does she know the way to her brother's castle? How?

Yet altogether it still wasn’t nearly enough to pay her way back to Damascus.

Just how do you think you're going to get out of your husband's castle on the Welsh border, past his knights, and catch a boat to Damascus all by yourself?

They passed through yet another gate, this one hinged and made of thick timber also reinforced with iron, but Leila took heart, noting a smaller door cut into one side. At least this gate might not prove difficult to pass through.

*dies laughing* She really believes that what little jewelry she has, and a few coins she steals and she's going to escape and get back to Damascus all by herself.

I know I'm nitpicking, but this book is so bad I can't help myself.

Let's guess. After all t h at on the wedding night, neither will think about confessing to a priest.

Annnnnnd, this is just the right tone to take when the king catches you in your evil doings. “Virgin, my ass,” Roger muttered. “Whore is more like it.”

“Practice those words for the priest, my love. We must hurry.”

“But won’t I need Roger’s consent as my guardian?”

“No, thank God. The Church deems such consent unnecessary for anyone older than fifteen. Come.”

*head desk*