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Albert Elrod
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So, the author apparently thinks that arrows can be lot on fire to create flaming projectiles. I'm sorry, but arrow heads aren't flammable. Flaming arrows require more preparation than finding a torch and touching your arrows to the flame.
— Jun 27, 2023 07:58PM
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Albert Elrod
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"Slashing [...] as if its own tentacle were a sword to slash enemies with."
"The pain hurt"
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— Jun 29, 2023 08:00AM
"The pain hurt"
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Albert Elrod
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The author uses odd words choices, suchs as "it fueled him out of his shock." I understand the meaning, but fueled doesn't make sense in context.
Also, there is poor sense of timescale. The main character is sent back in time by five years, yet he says that an event that is currently reoccurring had haunted his nightmares for many years. It's just odd.
— Jun 28, 2023 04:30AM
Also, there is poor sense of timescale. The main character is sent back in time by five years, yet he says that an event that is currently reoccurring had haunted his nightmares for many years. It's just odd.
